Left or just leaving?
They paid for their purchases and left the mini-market together. Eh Poh Nim was manoeuvring her shopping cart down the ramp when she saw a man running along the road. He was headed in her direction.
The above is a paragraph taken from a newspaper Article, Life in the idioms, which is a narative account of events happening in the writer's encounter with her neighbour at a mini-market.
The hightlighted verb "left" indicates a completed act of leaving, but the next sentence still talks about the process of leaving.
Such verb should be in past continuous tense to avoid a lapse in logical sequence.
Re-written the paragraph should read as "They paid for their purchases and were leaving the mini-market together. Eh Poh Nim was manoeuvring her shopping cart down the ramp when she saw a man running along the road. He was headed in her direction.
Monday, May 5, 2008
Past Continuous Required But Past Simple Used
Posted by Kengt, Penang (Seeking correct English) at 12:01 AM
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