Fewer words are sometimes better

Don't mask your writing with unnecessary words.


It's fresh, it's juicy and full of tasty fresh fruit goodness.

The above sentence is taken from a print advertisement.

Notice that a comma is used to connnect two complete sentences.

A comma splice has occurred or the sentence is regarded as a run-on sentence.

The sentence willl not only be grammatical but also sounds much better if rewritten as follows:-

It's fresh, juicy and full of tasty fresh fruit goodness.

It has always been a good advice: You will have fewer grammatical errors if you leave out a word that can be left out.