Monday, July 28, 2008

Pronouns can sometimes be misleading







Watch carefully and hit accurately




Pronouns are used for clarity, but if inappropriately used, they can cause confusion.

Look at the following example, which is a highlighted section of an article appearing in a newspaper:-

Fathers who spend time playing with their children can increase their intellectual and physical competency.

What is the second 'their' (which is highlighted in bold) referring to - fathers' or children's?

Obviously, the sentence can be rewritten to reflect the intended meaning unambiguously as follows:-

Fathers who spend time playing with their children can increase the latter's intellectual and physical competency.

Further explanations can be found in my earlier post :

Dr Mahathir or Pak Lah?

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