Watch carefully and hit accurately
Pronouns are used for clarity, but if inappropriately used, they can cause confusion.
Look at the following example, which is a highlighted section of an article appearing in a newspaper:-
Fathers who spend time playing with their children can increase their intellectual and physical competency.
What is the second 'their' (which is highlighted in bold) referring to - fathers' or children's?
Obviously, the sentence can be rewritten to reflect the intended meaning unambiguously as follows:-
Fathers who spend time playing with their children can increase the latter's intellectual and physical competency.
Further explanations can be found in my earlier post :
Dr Mahathir or Pak Lah?
Monday, July 28, 2008
Pronouns can sometimes be misleading
Posted by Kengt, Penang (Seeking correct English) at 12:01 AM
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